Wierd and wonderful creations

[Pikachu]

So, yeah. I've had these guys bouncing around in my head for a while now, and here they are. I'm only gonna post the first evolution of it, because I'm too lazy to draw the other two yet. XD

Also, please note this is only a rough sketch of the pokemon, but it will have to do until I make a better one.

For the large image, go to
i82.photobucket.com/albums/j263/avatarlegendofaang/Corleodraft.jpg

Species: Corleo
Type: Electric
Height: 5"
Length: 1' 1"
Gender ratio: Male 50%, female 50%
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Though small and unable to control electricity very well, Corleo are excellent team workers.

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Corleo usually gather in small groups. They are not as athletic as their evolved counterparts, and so cannot evade predators as well, preferring to have safety in numbers. The horns on their head are used to generate electricity, which can then be stored in their fur, which spikes up. When Corleo attack as a group, they can unleash electric attacks of 10,000 volts or more.
The lightning bolt on a Corleo's tail is a good indication of how old it is. Pups are born with it a pale cream colour, but it darkens and lengthens as it grows. A Corleo that is ready to evolve will have a tail of a golden amber colour.
Corleos mainly live in burrows, emerging above ground in the daytime to eat and store electricity. They cannot climb trees. A pack of Corleo is often watched over by an older Tintera or Corsadon (Corleo's evolved forms). When a Corleo in the pack is ready to evolve, they will hold a ceremony.

Moveset:

Tackle
Growl
Tail whip
Spark
Thunder Wave
Quick attack

Ability: Static

[Drake]

This is brilliant, but can you imagine someone fitting that into their profile? I'll need a smaller image as well, if it's not too much trouble

[Drake]

Accepted

[Pikachu]

TEHEE UPDATED POST


Species: Tintera
Type: Electric
Height: 2' 1"
Length: 5' 5"
Gender ratio: Male 50%, Female 50%
Evolves from Corleo at level 20

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Aggresive by nature, Tintera are rarely found in social groups. However, they form packs to hunt. The larger this Pokémon's horns are, the more mature it is.

Moveset:
All from Corleo, plus
Thunder fang
Bite
Body Slam
Howl
Rollout
Tickle
Scary face
Discharge

Ability: Lightningrod

[Drake]

Accepted

[Pikachu]

The final evolution... (may redo the suckish scratch-made sprite later)


Species: Corsadon
Type: Dark/Electric
Height: 4' 2"
Length: 6' 8"
Gender ratio: Male 50%, Female 50%
Evolves from Tintera when a level is gained during daytime while holding a Shiny Stone.

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Corsadon are lean and agile pokémon. Their supple frames allow them to perform stunning acrobatic feats, and they move so quickly in battle that opponents seem to be moving in slow-motion.

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All sorts of things can change when and where a Tintera evolves into Corsadon: therefore, it tends to happen at different times in the Tintera pack. The newly-evolved Corsadon sometimes stays with its pack, or even returns to the Corleo burrow where it used to live, but most Corsadons go off on their own. Much leaner and more agile than its previous forms, Corsadon is nonetheless bulky. To combat this, it has a pointed snout and set-back horns and ears to help decrease its air resistance. It is light on its feet and for the most part graceful, but deadly in battle.

A Corsadon's whip-like tail helps it balance, as well as being a powerful asset in battle. When a Corsadon has managed to gain full control over all three of its tails, it can use them in a variety of ways, from holding them stiff like a trident, to spreading them out and channelling power through them to create a circuit. A Corsadon's tail is not usually considered a part of its body, but it is long; almost half the length of the Corsadon's body.

Its crown-like horns not only protect its head, they can also be used to store large amounts of energy. Experienced Corsadon are able to meld their horns into different shapes during battle, from long, broadsword-like blades, to a curving helmet that covers its head and neck. The horns will begin to glow and pulse with electricity as they are being melded; however, this leaves them open to attack for a few seconds.

A Corsadon's paws are wide, and equipped with long talon-like claws. This enables them to climb trees, and even rocks, well. When two Corsadon clash over territory or prey, then they usually battle, but to a very strict set of rules, to avoid hurting each other too badly. The contenders must sheath their claws, before placing one paw against the opponent's and pushing. The two Corsadon will try to push each other over some sort of boundary - often into a river. Corsadon are able to swim very well, and are able to effectively pull off either special or physical moves, with lean, strong bodies and muscles, and deadly electricity and dark-type energy.


Moveset:

All from Corleo and Tintera, plus:

Agility
Nasty Plot
Aerial Ace
Iron Tail
Night Slash
Dark Pulse
Crunch
Thunder
Volt Tackle
Rock Slide

Ability: Volt Absorb

[emoemofire]

If it is indeed in my power, I'd say accepted, good job. ^^

However, since I'm cleaning up the Pokédex, I'll need a few favors from you...

First, I need Gender Ratios for all three, and any specific evolution details (evolution by level, thunderstone, day, etc).

And I'd also appreciate it if you could find a way to shorten the Flavour Text down to a sentence or two. Don't worry, you don't have to erase any of your lovely details on them - I can just put, "For more information, go here: " ^^

Lastly, I cropped all your sprites down. For Corsadon, I flipped the tail to make it fit better, if you don't like it, just say so and I'll use your original. That is, if it's accepted... which it should be.
Quick tail edit:

[Pikachu]

Consider it done, April.

[emoemofire]

Thanks, Pikachu! And as for the quick tail edit on Corsadon, will that be okay?

[Pikachu]

It's fine. I might re-do the scratch later, but for now that's fine.

Oh, and here's a baby Latios to go with the baby Latias that Inu did:



Cute, no?

[emoemofire]

Flippin' adorable. XDD Accepted as a baby pokémon-thinger. =P

[Pikachu]

Okay, trying my hand at some legends:


Species: Iblivyan
Type: Dark/Ground
Height: 7' 2"
Length: 17' 4" {Yes, it's a huge legendary XD}
Gender Ratio: Genderless

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Iblivyan is depicted in Tynri myths as 'the shadow of the dunes'. The crest on its back is hardened like glass.

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-INSERT TEXT HERE-


Moveset:
Sand Tomb
Spikes
Dark Pulse
Earth Power
Night Slash
Sucker Punch
Dragon Claw
Tail Whip
Ancient Power
Head Smash

[emoemofire]

Iblivyan is not accepted. Sorry. =[

[Pikachu]

Well, it's not exactly done yet anyway. So there. =P

But I suppose if it's not accepted then there is no point in working further on it. But it does come in a pair, so I could show you the pair first.

What exactly are you looking for - the sprite, moves, type, or just the fact it's a semi-legend?

[emoemofire]

A little bit of everything... it just doesn't stick out and say, 'This is a legendary' to me [or Drake, for that matter].

[Pikachu]

Okay, fair enough. I'll finish the sprite, description e.c.t., and then we'll see.

[Pikachu]

Whoo, this thread hasn't been updated in a long time!

Anyway, working over all my old projects. Guess who are getting makeovers?



They don't have official sprites, really, so here are some new ones (others to be put up when they're done).